Reminds of Earth Spirit, in that he wants to do a bit of everything. Tone that down a bit. He cannot do stun and miss and disarm and dispel and slow and critical. Its a design mess. Find the one thing it wants to do, and do that one thing. The E is a mistake. 3s is too much to sit about. I understand it deals dmg, but If you sit still for three seconds Promising that if they let you live, you'll destroy them You are mini-supernova. I think you might want a passive on the E. Also, Q is Sven's Storm Bolt with Blink. Could almost be Sven's Aghs.